Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I really think that the feedback that I receive from other students is really beneficial.  The feedback lets me see things that I did not see previously.  Usually, the feedback for my formatting is the most helpful to me, because, personally, I don't pay attention to my formatting as much as I should.

The feedback I give is pretty minimal.  I feel like I mostly give out suggestions on what I'd do, but I know that each person's writing is their own, and they should be the one deciding on what it is.  I mostly base my feedback on things that are a little blurry or confusing.  So that in turn, makes me try to not have any holes in my own writing.

I really like the blog commenting.  It's cool to connect with other students since because this is an online class, it can feel like it's just personal homework without other students.  I'm pretty content with my blog introduction and comment wall.  I think that it gets done what needs to get done.

I don't think there's too much that can be done differently.  We each get a multitude of feedback from different students, so there is enough variety of feedback.  I should try to analyze other things rather than plot holes, such as things that would help boost up the story.

I don't pay attention to a lot of the details when I write, so it's like I'm wandering in the same spot.  However, feedback lets me see the road ahead and continue further in improving.

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